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  ![](img/dashboard.png "Entering the Creator Dashboard")
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- Creator Dashboard is the place where you can configure your stream information, chat moderation, profile info, and more. For now, we will focus on stream information. From the main page of the dashboard, click on the `Stream Manager` button on the left, and then choose the `Edit Stream Info` option on the right.
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+ In the Creator Dashboard, you can configure stream information, chat moderation, and profile info, among other customisations. The most important thing for getting started is configuring the stream information. From the main page of the dashboard, click on the `Stream Manager` button on the left, and then choose the `Edit Stream Info` option on the right.
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- A dialog will open for you to enter your stream's information. You can fill the fields however you want; however, the title should comprehend what the stream will be about and also be inviting for people viewing the list of available streams. The category must be set to the game you are playing at the moment, which would be `osu!`.
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+ A dialog will open for you to enter your stream's information. You can fill the fields however you want; however, the title should comprehend what the stream will be about and be inviting for people viewing the list of available streams. The category should also be set to the game you will be livestreaming, which is `osu!` in this case.
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  ![](img/stream-info.png "Editing your stream's information")
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  ## OBS Studio
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- After you create and configure your Twitch account, the next thing you will need is a streaming app. This guide will use OBS Studio; however, you are free to check any other alternatives (e.g. [XSplit Broadcaster](https://www.xsplit.com/broadcaster)).
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+ After you create and configure your Twitch account, the next step is to acquire a streaming app. This guide will only cover streaming with OBS Studio, but feel free to consider alternative software (e.g. [XSplit Broadcaster](https://www.xsplit.com/broadcaster)).
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  Proceed to [OBS Studio's website](https://obsproject.com/) and download the installer for your operating system. Open the installer and follow the steps to install the app.
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  ![](img/configuration-wizard.png "OBS Studio's auto-configuration wizard")
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- The next section to be configured are video settings. Choose the resolution of your screen for the `Base (Canvas) Resolution` field (should be detected automatically), and `Either 60 or 30, but prefer 60 when possible` for the `FPS` field.
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+ The next step is to configure some video settings. Choose the resolution of your screen for the `Base (Canvas) Resolution` field (should be detected automatically), and `Either 60 or 30, but prefer 60 when possible` for the `FPS` field.
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- Finally, you will need to configure the stream information for OBS Studio to livestream on Twitch. Click the `Use Stream Key` button, and enter the Primary Stream key that was copied earlier into the field. Leave other options checked as they are, and click `Next`.
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+ Finally, to connect the app to your Twitch channel, you will need to enter your stream information into OBS Studio. Click the `Use Stream Key` button, and enter the Primary Stream key that was copied earlier into the field. Leave other options checked as they are, and click `Next`.
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  ![](img/adding-stream-key.png "Configuring stream information in OBS Studio")
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  ## What's next?
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- Now, after you configure OBS Studio and your Twitch account, click `Start Streaming` in OBS Studio to make a livestream. Your stream will appear on [Twitch](https://www.twitch.tv/directory/game/osu!) and [osu! website's livestream listing](https://osu.ppy.sh/community/livestreams) in a couple of minutes. That's all you need to know to start your journey with streaming. Of course we have only covered the basics of livestreaming, and there are many things you can still do, with the most important of them being:
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+ Now, after configuring OBS Studio and your Twitch account, click `Start Streaming` in OBS Studio to make a livestream. Your stream will appear on [Twitch](https://www.twitch.tv/directory/game/osu!) and [osu! website's livestream listing](https://osu.ppy.sh/community/livestreams) in a couple of minutes. That's all you need to know to start your journey with streaming. Of course, this guide only covers the basics of livestreaming; there are many ways to go beyond and improve your livestream. So, some important points to consider:
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- - **Find the best streaming settings.** The automatically configured settings provided by OBS Studio might not be perfect for your device. So check if your livestream is working fine and what needs to be improved to provide the best experience for your viewers.
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- - **Build a community.** This one is probably the hardest, as building your own community from scratch requires insane amounts of dedication and time.
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+ - **Find the best streaming settings.** The automatically configured settings provided by OBS Studio might not be perfect for your device. So, check if your livestream is working fine and, if not, what needs to be improved to provide the best experience for your viewers.
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+ - **Build a community.** This is very challenging, as building your own community from scratch requires high levels of commitment, dedication, and time. However, it can result in the most reward for your effort.
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  - **Improve livestream quality.** This can include adding new overlays, camera capture, scene transition effects, osu!-specific plugins, Twitch chat display, Twitch integrity, and many more. You can also improve your channel's appearance by setting an avatar, banner, and general info.
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  - ...and most importantly, have fun!